Booming, beating, pumping
My heart rages in my chest
Powerful dizzying blood flow
My vision's blurry at best
exhausted, but exhilarated
Wanting to stop but I cant
A confusing, Driving fire within
A grimly forcing enchant
Aching, bleeding, twisting
My weak body betrays me
Pushed too far past breaking point
Boiling in my inner flame
I feel it burn within me
Too much for me to take
To want cant be reached, belongs the blame
My one greatest mistake
Im reaching for something that cant be had
tasting forbidden fruit
And dying with the craving
An angry desire so brute
Author notes
idk. idk at all. this is what i get for listening to Avenged Sevenfold - Trashed And Scattered.
A contest entry
- Can you make me feel? (now open to PWs) by glitterydoom.
550 points, ended November 16, 2008, 16 entries
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Comments
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wow, I love this, the imagery is great.
thankyou for entering and best of luck
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I love it. to me it kinda has a sexual twist to it. but hey, that's me.
anyway, amazing write and i agree with tay and what she said.
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lmao. i wont wont admit whether or not I was thinking the same thing
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cool.
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i like it! idk...it doesnt sound like a junkie wrote it too me...but u know thats me. its...idk...not junkie material though. lolz.
*hugs and kisses* ur GORGEOUS gf
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