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[ In dire need I search the streets at night, ]

In dire need I search the streets at night,
looking,
piericing into peoples homes',
scrolling through the streets at night,
Hidden in the shadows of her bed,
I see a Pure innocent victim, but still a teenager....
The sweetest blood of all....
I Shroud myself in shadows, and leap to the window,
not a sound made...
I open the window slowly,
only a small creek...
I hid quickly.
Then came back to see if she was awake, still asleep she was..
leaped thorugh the window and closes it quietly.
looked back, still asleep.
I creep toward my victim, Greed instiled in my heart.
I pierce her skin with my venomus teeth..
Oh the lovely blood!
I was enjoying myself gorgeing on her blood,
then after I hear a slight moan...
then a groan, she was moving franticly against me....
I wanted to see why she was doing that while I was feeding,
It was highly annoying,
Innocents dont do this,
I look at her with extreme curiousity...
she was enjoying it!!
She looked up at me and said"Why did you stop,I was enjoying myself..I never felt anything like this before! Dont stop, Please dont stop, It will drive me insane if you do..."
I didnt mind now, I fed on her blood until I was completely full...I was the greatest feast I have ever gotten.
My Dinner was done so I headed for the door,
She suddenly grabbed hold of me and said "Spend the night with me."
Extremely surprised, I said "WHAT?!?!?"
She then said "you granted me extreme pleasure that I longed for for so long"
...
"You deserve my innocence"
"Do you know what I am? A VAMPIRE"
"I dont care."
"You are not scared?"
"No"
"I cant."
"Fine, have it your way, but I can tell you were extremely hungry.."
"Yes I was, It is hard to find Young Innocent Blood now.."
"Well you picky.."
"Did you just want have a chat."
"No."
"Then why do you keep me here."
"I am lonely."
"Fine, Now I shall come every night, Then leave."
"Only that..."
"Expecting longer time? I have to find food."
"Have my blood."
"The you shall be mine for eternity if I only drink your blood,Would you want that?"
"I'll die If I have to"
"You will."
"Really.."
"Scared?"
"TRY ME."
*He cuts her wrists open an drinking all of the blood in her body, Leaving an imprint.*
"Awaken."
she lies still, he is puzzled..
"AWAKEN!"
Still as a cold rock.
I find a book, on her dresser, I read it:
"The man that will give me comfort, I shall die in his arms...no matter who or what he is."
.........
In dire need I search the streets at night,
looking,
piericing into peoples homes',
scrolling through the streets at night,
Hidden in the shadows of her bed,
I see a Pure innocent victim, but still a teenager....
I remember the girl 10 yrs ago.
I Shroud myself in shadows, and leap to the window,
not a sound made...
I open the window slowly,only a small creek...
I hid quickly.
Then came back to see if she was awake, still asleep she was..
leaped thorugh the window and closes it quietly.
looked back, still asleep.
I Kissed her on the forehead and wished her sweet dreams.
A girl I then see from afar, Looking at me, But shroweded in shadows smiles....

Author notes

I dont know, I had to write about the victim being a girl, I just can imagine it happening with a guy/ so I played a guys role^^

Option two:

I want to see poems about vampires! The same applies here as for the wolves. It can be anything from dark to just a little two line poem for all I care.

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  • amanda vampiress
    August 29, 2008

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    Interesting!

    Thank you for entering! I really liked this. It kept my attention till the end, and I did not see the twist coming towards the end. Very good job! I don't think I would have ever thought enough about it to come up with an ending such as yours. keep up the good work!