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Valleys

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Though the valleys the shadows surround the stride with questions,

the Lord's Spirit prevails as a wind, speaking from His word,

echoes of scriptures, a choir of pure light, pass through the soul,

easing fears that the darkness curls around the heart

while wandering the depression of essence through trial of faith and steps

so far from the flame felt in His tabernacle.

How He calms the way, eyes given sight in the midst of the path,

that is traversed alone, but was first by others,

no detour assured by night, still the journey embraced to keep pace unto the end.

 

Then comes the tempest strain upon one's trust,

heat broils in its parched demands, withering the frail veil of hope,

a single grasp clings on to the tether of tomorrow,

holding one upright against the acrid passage through destitution.

 

Heaven's drops of empowerment come as rain upon the moment,

it soaks within as a pool, reviving with awareness

of how the anointing sleeps inside to shield with the help of God's hands

against any storm or challenge.

 

Standing in the same spot despair consumed earlier,

no longer seeing the pilgrimage as a hardship,

but the sojourn of spiritual enlightenment, each step a blessing instead of lament.

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  • Tirrell
    September 11, 2008

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    Wonderfully composed, this brought me a smile and warmness to heart,(you make this look easy) I very much enjoyed the lines here...


  • FransB gold member
    August 29, 2008

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    You have given me the honour

    to read this lovely poem of blessed 'lamantation' of upliftment, and of pure joy and praise that He is our Lord. It reads like a prayer, soft and comforting, and its flow like "rain upon the moment". It augments my poem so well, and I could 'feel with you', as I read it. Your entry is much appreciated in these early hours of the morning, as it provides a blessing for those, like me, who read it. Be blessed. Frans


  • Rose Angel gold member
    August 29, 2008

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    Ah....This is unbelievably inspirational when your take on the picture makes one go back to that time thousands of years ago when Gods people took that journey in the wilderness..a journey of faith, relying like children on the flame of fire by night and cloud by day to know He was with them...You have taken this thought and expanded it into a masterpiece! Bravo for rising to the challenge with your pen and inspiration!