palms grow
brushed silent
with tomorrow's tips
hurrying in care's larder
with blanketed vision
masking crayon-waxed levees
in cessation of lily-breath
eager achievers swindle
drying broken earth
bending liquids
drops live captive
dance dangling
whispering spring balance
on the edge of color
Author notes
Image Credit: http://www.flickr.com/photos/cesarcabrera/408666504/
A contest entry
- Smoke and Mirrors by Gypsie Ink.
450 points, ended September 3, 2008, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Beautiful!
Captivating and provocative. A decadent write. Thank you for your remarkable entry and best of luck in my contest. -
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Gypsie Ink
Thank you so much for the wonderful comment an the honor of gold in your contest. I am truly humbled. What a great contest. Thank you. ~Pamela
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Simply brilliant!!!!! Not much else needs to be said about this poem. I like the careful way you craft your poems on the page. and your word combinations are like tasting wine example dance dangling, that was like a perfect grape the taste linger a while after your read it
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Jeff
Thank you so much.
I am so pleased you enjoyed this one and do hope you have been well. 
~Pamela
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WOW!
YOU GOT THAT 'SMOKE N MIRRORS' CONCEPT NAILED TO THE FLOOR WITH THIS PIECE! Goodness, this such an amazing piece, oh that's right you always write amazing pieces! l.o.l. silly me!
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Richard
Thank you so much. ~Pamela
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