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Practice makes perfect

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If you just stand still
I promise you will not feel a thing

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Picture Credit: Love_hurts_by_Alicelefay

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  • penman gold member
    September 8, 2008
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    wonderful

    Very creative and well expressed or a short poem. Congratulations on the bronze.


  • Spiritual Soul
    September 1, 2008

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    oh I love this cathy, and the background is so cool too. congrats on the trophy, so well deserved Sorry I have been gone a while, you know College and Stuff
    Blessings,
    ~Michaela~


  • Valley Girl silver member
    August 29, 2008

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    OOH, nice take on the prompt! How she is warning her victim (I am assuming a man). Using her seductive side so she can get what she really wants. Brilliant take! THank you for your entry, best of luck in the contest. ♥