I lost my face that day
lost all I fought to save
lost her friendship over burning eyes
Lost my happiness
Everyone desires to be found not lost
Yes it was impulse when I lost the mask
Couldn't hide it anymore but I am lost with no answers
Enchanting nothings lost in the wind
...Telling the truth but the his lies lost me
The greed lost its way
I decided to skip on the rocks, but was lost.
Loneliness and bordem lost my heart's words
Darkness lost dreamworlds
Blood lost its way through my veins
Apologies lost thier standings
Insecurities lost strength
Doubts lost purpose
...wandering around lost, scared and hurt
lack of communication lost or perhaps found;
lost in a world
dark with lost souls
seeing my influence grasping but I lost the grasp
I lost you.
Author notes
lost
Prompt choose one word to put in every line in the poem.
A contest entry
- What's Your Word? by Poetess12.
2400 points, ended September 8, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
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Great job with the prompt. You made a very sad yet nicely written poem while all the while putting the word in each line. Excellent.
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thank you
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Ok I admit it..
I'M LOST! l.o.l. sorry it seemed funny! yeah, you got a pretty interesting piece here my friend, and looks like you pulled out some serious dark issues
from within. lots of luck to you in the contest my friend!
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lol I know all those issues
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wow internally deep and profound . i know the feeling. You did a great job sis here. You know that i am fan of your work. you expressed yourself well here.YOu write from that place deep and from heart. Good job and keep penning.
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thank you very much brother
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I like how you used the word "Lost" in your poem.
especially at the end when you put "I lost you."
This poem has a good ending to it.
it is a well written poem using the word "Lost."
Thank you for your entry.
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thank you
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