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Purity is Peace

Inside her mind's eye
The air is clean and peaceful,
Kappa in Silence.

Author notes

I chose definition 1 for Kappa. The Greek symbol meaning purity.

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  • Kappa Pyua
    September 22, 2008
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    Instead of the comma it needs a dash and no period at the end. No need for caps unless your making a point. I loke this description of truly being a symbol, not flonting it about, but doing it silently in hopes that people will take notice and follow the example. Thx for entering.