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dolphin jumps
in ocean blue
I feel free






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haiku 3-4-3 # 2 Deff of Kappa.

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  • Kappa Pyua
    September 22, 2008

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    The haiku works, except for the pause defined by a dash after your second line. But I do not see where this is related to kappa. Maybe you could IM me later to tell me. thx for entering.


  • Sunshine Always
    September 6, 2008

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    There is a definate feeling of freedom isn't there when you can watch these magnificent creatures in their rightful place.. spoke volumes..well done...mal

  • Kappa Pyua
    August 29, 2008
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    you did not include which prompt you chose, plz correct, asap, so it is not DQ'