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clarissa

Captivating, and astonishingly beautiful, my
Life has been blessed by the glory of your
Angelic presence my love. My heart
Revels in the wonder that
I have found in you. My
Soul is now truly alive, thanks to the
Serenity that you and your precious babies have given me. For
As long as we shall live, I will love only you

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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    August 30, 2008

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    you painted

    a beautifully and romantic Acrostic, to say that is a lot directed to the poet, I thank you for this entry and good luck in my contest
    Linda ... ty


  • JoyfulWriter
    August 29, 2008
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    So sweet and beautiful here, Bro! Best of luck to you in this contest...smiles, Terry


  • firefly53633
    August 29, 2008

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    Sweet!

    This is a lovely expression of love! Flow is so smooth one doesn't realize it is an acrostic! Nice job. Good luck!


    • God of Thunder
      September 2, 2008
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      thank you for the nice comment I am writing a lot of acrostic for my second book and am glad that you liked it

    • God of Thunder
      August 30, 2008
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      thank you so much for your comments it means a lot to me

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