Words evade me
At a loss as to why
Nothing will congeal
Simply words that don’t go
Which way
What do I say
Mind aflutter
Empty of thoughts
Mind locked away
Emotions frozen solid
Author notes
free verse
In a list
A contest entry
- Short Lived Short Form #36 by Samplette.
1500 points, ended September 5, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Oh how I can relate to this one! Great depth of meaning in such few but profound words! I also love this background! It is gorgeous!
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Like your mind going in so many directions. I can relate! Great words!
Good luck!
Steffany
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I was this way for a long time. Had my mind on too many things in the natural. Worrying my downfall. A wonderful piece. Thank you for entering.
Sam
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