Hidden Emotions erupt deep within,
let the writing begin.
Tears fall on paper, they blur the ink,
as my mind rethinks.
Death and lost love has taken its toll,
words from a tortured soul.
Ache in my heart for those I love dear,
a poem for each tiny tear.
Wrapped in a bubble I wish I could stay,
to keep all sorrow at bay.
Penning my feelings, I let go my muse,
to give up I still refuse.
An ounce of hope and faith still reside,
with my muse side by side.
Keeps me from going completely insane,
little by little release my pain.
A touch of humor on a good day or two,
silly muse helps me through.
Buried deep, my muse shall always long,
to write a new love song.
In a list
A contest entry
- A Contest for your Muse!!! -- by Florida Sunshine.
450 points, ended September 17, 2008, 34 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow - this is a fantastic write on your muse ~ I found the format interesting and still has a nice flow.
Your poem has met the requirements of the contest - I do appreciate you sharing this with us, it was a welcome pleasure to read and review your work.
Best of luck to you,
Florida Sunshine
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Good luck Sandy!
Our muses are amusing! I hope yours does well here. This is a fun concept to work with.
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This is nice. I have been asked why I write so much and my answer is because it helps me. but there are days like today and yesterday where nothing seems to flow.
I love the line a poem for each tiny tear, sometimes I think that is the best ones for they are so heartfelt. I've even cried while writing some of my happier ones.
bless you
Rhonda
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Hello Rhonda
I too cry when writing some poetry. I see you understand my words quite well. Thank you for stopping by. Hugs and smiles! You take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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Moving and lovely; this reaches beyond ... reading this I felt as though I was watching a curtain opening on a stage to show the depth and beauty behind
Best of luck!
♥
Stay safe
Love to you
~Manda
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Hugs and Smiles
Thank You Amanda. Always a delight when my sweet friend stops by. Take care. Sandy
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DEEPLY TOUCHING!!!!!
I for one am able to associate with your beautiful words so well, it is because of events in my life I began to write down my thoughts and feelings in poem form. Over the years my opening up has been a blessing in so many ways.
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Hi Kevin
Good Morning sweet friend. Another lovely comment to make me smile. Thank you a bunch!! Hugs and Smiles.
Take care,
Sandy
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Your usual talent for rhyme, is working so well. I read the lines that ache for love, as sorrow is closed. Smile and enjoy the light as feelings heal, nice write.
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Most Lovely Comment
Thank You Dan. Your comments are so thoughtful and encouraging my friend. I do smile a little more these days. Thank You.
Peace and Blessings,
Sandy
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A spiritual kiss is weaved within this lovely write. Beautifully penned. I wish you the best in the contest.
Sam
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Your comment is most appreciated. Thank you for reading. Take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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