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sitting around

sitting around,
alone,
all day
writing poems. ugh!
why?
who
wants
to?
do
you?

Author notes

Author's Notes:   The poem is a contest entry to the contest:  Short Lived Short Form #36

 

This little 10 line poem expresses some of my frustrations in writing poetry. The cartoon looks like I feel, sometimes!

This poem is an absolutely FREE FORM poem -- so I guess it could be classed as a "Decastich."

A contest entry

Why do you like short poems?

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Comments


  • Frogzter gold member
    September 3, 2008

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    Yes, I want to also! You have summed it up well with few words that are not short on meaning by any means! Best of luck to you!

    Frogz~


  • Samplette gold member
    August 29, 2008

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    The love of poetry keeps me writing, the need to express myself sometimes keeps me trapped. I can relate to this, very nice. Thank you for entering.
    Sam