Come to me girl as I put my face between your legs
showing you how to lick a good wet sweet pussy.
As I put my stiff tongue between
your pussy lips making you beg.
Licking all the juices thats running out of you
like a slow running faucet that you can't turn off
until I'm done with your ass.
Watching you arch your back and moan uncontrollably
as you squeeze your soft warm thighs
against both sides of my head.
I pull back from you and grab my strap-on
and put it on so I can show you
that you don't need a man.
Pushing your thighs open
as I enter your sacred hole
you howl like your making
a mating call.
Watching your breast bounce the bounce
when I flip you over to take you from behind
making that kitty cat feel so good.
Pussy drippin on the sheets
as you scream for more
grabbing at the headboard
above your head.
Moaning trying to catch your breath
as you tell me your about to cum.
I flip you back over on your back
and put my mouth over your quivering pussy.
I catch every last drop of your
sweet pussy cream you give me
licking your clit at the same time.
After I lick you clean like a hungry whore
that I am I wink at you and say
now it's your turn.
Author notes
The picture being used with this write I do not claim to be my own. Picture from yahoo images
A contest entry
- Somebody out there has to be getting some sooooooo by jcat.
600 points, ended September 14, 2008, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - "Let's Get It On" by Loversdance.
400 points, ended November 18, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I Want The Best of Pre Writes by theredcatjazzoflove.
700 points, ended November 25, 2008, 29 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Best of the best... by Jfd.
1500 points, ended February 3, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I'M CUMMMMMMINNNNN, MISS H C!
I pull back from you and grab my strap-on
and put it on so I can show you
that you don't need a man.
Pushing your thighs open
as I enter your sacred hole
you howl like your making
a mating call.
From a man who loves a woman with a strap-on who knows how to use it - I'll have to say that the above lines were my favorite part and had me JERKING my HARD COCK and cumming when I got to it - and licking up all of my creamy cum from my hands and fingers after. As I'll be eating me Sunday Dinner soon after spending a few hours outside shoveling snow - let me just say - that this is what the doctor ordered - DESSERT before DINNER - that was as white as the snow BUT much more fun and creamier! It is easy to see why this piece one THE GOLD and I'll be sure to read it and peek through your window at the two of you again as you two lovely creatures were HOTTER than HOT CHOCOLATE, indeed! Perhaps, you'll invite my in next time IF I can whip up a lot of fresh cream for you! HE! HE! Thanks for sharing, Baby - and I look forward to reading more with THROBBING DICK in hand.
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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I Can Be Your Student
As I sit at my desk with my hands tied behind my back,
my eyes blindfolded waiting on your act,
seduce me my teacher
cause I am your student.
Put your pussy upon my face,
saturate my tongue with your choklaty taste,
teach me to be the student you want,
and I'll show you how a good student learns,
up and down,
side to side,
my tongue will wiggle,
every drip,
every drop,
your insides will tickle,
smother me with your ass,
and I'll be the head of the class,
get it,
head,
of the class,
TO BE CONTINUED!!!!
I really liked this poem and that is why I gave you a short rendition of my version. Just a little something that I had running through my head while I was reading this poem. Girl you are a freak and I can imagine what hot choklat taste like when you make it. Like I said before, you are "Tha Choklat Wonda". Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
Once again I really love this poem.
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wow! Love this poem! Damn is write! Holy hell! Thanks soo much for entering my contest!
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Not much I can say about this piece except...damn, I'll be back later once I work this one off.
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WOW!!! That was a wonderful way to treat a pussy, I loved the ending when you say "now it's your turn."
Nice
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I thoroughly enjoyed this hot fuckin' write, chocolate. I think that as always your imagery and rhythm is just amazing in this poem and it just makes me so glad when I read your poems. I enjoyed this on count of everything it was, and that involves the meaning and the way you put the sexual organs into play.
I think I truly did wet myself over this one... and that is a pleasureable feeling thing. Thanks for yet another hot amazing write, and never stop writing them as steamy and sexy as this one. I just wouldn't be able to stand that... haha -
Wow!!!! You are certainly good at what u do!!
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WOW
Mostly i dontcast my attention on sexy poems. but as i saw thin poem it attracted my eyes so i read it.
its a excellent piece i ever read in ap.
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Congrats on the gold dear!
Well done.
Jeremy0826
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Hot girl on girl action!!!! Loved this and thank you for entering it!! I am happy to award it GOLD....
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Here Kitty Kitty
Girlfriend you are killing me. I have sworn off women and relationships because of the petty bickering involved and the constant whining. You my friend are driving me insane. If it were easier, I would just stop reading you, but we both know that won't happen. Keep driving me crazy then I'll just burst, that will answer all my problems. Best wishes that I was there. your friend, Boog
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Wow this was amazing. Good Luck in the contest.
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Wow! I like this,and the pic as well.
good luck.
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Powerful
A very erotic and intense poem. You truly paint the images so well. Thank you for sharing.
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Teach me. I like my women like I like my cofee, HOT and Black. You might like this one: http://allpoetry.com/background/for/item/4576291
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F fff... Damn!! That's some serios commitment to the education of your pupil, Miss
Steamier than satan's sauna and twice as Hot!
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jeez
~Aj
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Nicely done!!!
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HOLY SHIT!!!!
Just say it like ya mean it girl!! WoooooHoooo!!!!
this is mouthwateringly pleaurable!!!
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whats up girl
i am on the wrong side to comment on this bitches excite me hon this here made me excited i am in a place of buisness you about to make me forget i am a Jehovah Witness chocolate we need to write so we can have poetry sex 
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WoW
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Very hot, yep I am definitely hot now!
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ga whats going on with your ass that pussy is moon walking huh were my bae at I bet she would luv this hell i a like ya boi i will send u a factory of apples
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DAMN!!
I think the 'teacher deserves an apple! l.o.l.
wow, very hott!!
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Sorry people had to change my pic.
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Hottest...H...hottest!!!!
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DAMN H!!!! That shit is H-O-T!!!! Kudos to you my friend
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hot
wow ms Chocolate what a fuck you know i'm loving it
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Oh, God, hot....
you KNOW how I love that same-sex stuff, don't you...
that's really GOOD!! -
Hott! Love the pic. Keep on writing.
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