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Reflections

autumn reflections
in the crystal blue water -
window to my heart!

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Purity

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  • Mairi bheag gold member
    September 22, 2008
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    I like this, even though in a haiku the season should be indicated rather than named.


  • Kappa Pyua
    September 22, 2008

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    I like these words so simple, soft, and true. Nature in it's self is Purity because it is innocent of all actions, and Nature should be the window to everyone's heart. thx for entering.

    • harriet567
      September 22, 2008
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      Thank you!

      Thank you SO MUCH for your comment and for the Honorable Mention!