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Ill-fated Invocation

You thought to hurt me
These wounds mean nothing
Still you will pay...

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  • Valley Girl silver member
    August 29, 2008

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    Wow! A great anger piece! You have really caputured her feelings with your words! I really like how you have ended the poem. Thank you for entering my contest, best of luck as well. ♥


  • PrincessOfFire
    August 29, 2008
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    I can see such anger expressed here. The strength of her stands on your words. Good luck.