I've reflected often,
long and hard,
about my life.
No insight there
that I might share,
I do not dare
to offer advice.
Perhaps I should discard
the pose of wise old sage;
after all, my friend,
life is not a stage,
nor I an actor.
The years do not confer
grace or dignity,
and as for wisdom,
well, you see,
age is not a factor.
A contest entry
- Anything and Whatever by fairytalelovestory.
875 points, ended September 14, 2008, 48 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wonderful! I really loved this! age has nothing to do with wisdom! well to me it doesn't ..lol. I really like what you did here..
best of luck in the contest..
Angel
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beautiful and a great flow as well
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Good luck bill with this very interesting piece.love the last five lines....mal


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Great Write Friend!
I love actors. And ageless factors. Wise old age is in the young. We the aged write about it. Or we get drunk and say silly things like me. Great work! Please ... more! KC

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