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Not a Factor

I've reflected often,
long and hard,
about my life.
No insight there
that I might share,
I do not dare
to offer advice.

Perhaps I should discard
the pose of wise old sage;
after all, my friend,
life is not a stage,
nor I an actor.

The years do not confer
grace or dignity,
and as for wisdom,
well, you see,
age is not a factor.

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  • Angelflower
    August 30, 2008

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    Wonderful! I really loved this! age has nothing to do with wisdom! well to me it doesn't ..lol. I really like what you did here.. best of luck in the contest..

    Angel


  • fairytalelovestory
    August 29, 2008
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    beautiful and a great flow as well


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    August 29, 2008
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  • Sunshine Always
    August 29, 2008
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    Good luck bill with this very interesting piece.love the last five lines....mal

  • OldHatAndCat
    August 29, 2008

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    Great Write Friend!

    I love actors. And ageless factors. Wise old age is in the young. We the aged write about it. Or we get drunk and say silly things like me. Great work! Please ... more! KC

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