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Before the Sun

Before the sun comes
There is the moon's lovely glow.
To purify me.

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  • Kappa Pyua
    September 22, 2008
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    I like the interpretation in this one. lose the caps though thier not neccessary.

    before the sun
    the moon's radiant glow-
    purifies

    If my spelling is correct, lol. Mine is not to good. I think this would suite your words better. Just my opinion feel free to disagree. Thx for entering


  • Xx Secrets xX
    September 13, 2008
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    I thought it was beautiful...it's short but the image I get is so beautiful. Wonderful write


  • myrataal silver member
    August 29, 2008

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    Ah! So beautiful ...

    I would've left out the punctuation if it was my poem. Also not capitalized. But ... it is not my poem.

    Be well.

    Myra