She walks into the room,
my eyes are all hers for the taking,
babies in a playful mood,
and I am so into you in the giving.
Silent brush strokes of my mind,
paint a picture of seamless love,
as the strokes of your wings,
caress me like a soft white dove.
Without rhyme or reason,
I shall always take you,
and beyond all of the seasons,
years of love flow so true.
Author notes
Good evening sunshine.
A contest entry
- Quickie by Valley Girl.
300 points, ended August 29, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A great top piece. Thank you for editing this. I like your spin on the prompt. Very original. Thank you for entering my contest, best of luck as well.
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There is only a 13 word limit. If you wanted to, you could always keep your longer version for yourself and just make a condensed one for the contest? I just don't want to DQ Lemme know.
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This is a n emotional write. It would be such a great entry except this contest ask for 13 words only. Good luck.
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Oh my, thank you that's fine. thank you for the inspiration to write what I have. I may not qualify but my words are true. My best wishes always.
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