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Resurrection

 

 

 

 

Resurrection 

 

revenge

 

runs throughout me

 

hating you

 

I'm back

 

 

to return the favor!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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13 Words
Picture prompt: Love_hurts_by_Alicelefay

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  • Ms. Black Eyeliner
    September 4, 2008

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    OOOOOOHHH

    i likes it

    kinda creepy

    very nice

    i love the simple sentances and breaks

    mucho good job


  • daviscth silver member
    August 30, 2008
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    Great take on the prompt. Congrats on the silver cup.


  • Entwining Beauty
    August 29, 2008
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    Excellent poem very chilling Deep and dark emotion Good luck in the contest


  • Valley Girl silver member
    August 29, 2008

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    OOH! Chilling and Dark! I love the angry message you have portrayed in this! Fabulous stuff J! Thank you for entering in my contest! Best of luck as well! ♥


  • Asylaarix
    August 29, 2008

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    Hehe ... you always know how to make something so short so amazing. I love this babe. It's fantastic! Your words are always so powerful! Love ya


  • PrincessOfFire
    August 29, 2008

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    As always you use your words as strong statements making the individual ones stand strongest. Good luck.

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