meaty dishes fill the nose cavities
senses swell before our new feast
carnal desires prod us onward
chewing flesh excites the mind
greasy corn forms great outer shells
filled with fried bits, a taco forms
cheese and hot sauce add more spice
dripping sweat only uses old napkins
fill our mouths with anything around
carnal tacos please the coliseum crowd
Author notes
prompt: #2
carnal tacos
10 lines
A contest entry
- PIF PROMPT CONTEST by penman.
700 points, ended August 30, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Turn those greenies into Gold (or silver or bronze) pt 5 by whispernthedark.
660 points, ended September 20, 2008, 20 entries
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Comments
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Great take on that prompt. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
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whisper
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Excellent entry--Best of luck in the contest!!
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