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love in the club

I'd never had a pussy before
but I kind of liked the way
she moved toward me
I fingered my drink
and stared at the possibilities
the black dress
rich, long dark hair
slung casually
across half contained breasts
bursting out and asking
just to be fondled
she was tanned
and found myself wondering
just what color her nipples would be
and how erect once my tongue
had danced on each one
felt my panties soak
and she smiled as if she knew
winked and nodded
so I followed her to an office door
she was managing the bar
and the joint was jumping
but not as much as my juices
were pumping and turned on
by the sight of her ass
wiggling in front of me

she shut the door
lifted her skirt
revealing a shaved pussy
and fingering it
delectably
asking if I needed to taste
hitched her skirt higher
showing me the length
of her thighs
didn't need a second invite
to get on my knees
and take a bite

she put her hands in my hair
and I started to lick
it was salty and wet
stuck my tongue in
found her clit
long slow strokes
while she moaned
glanced up and saw
she was rubbing her nipples
dark brown and erect
breasts bouncing free
with her hands kneading
pleading me for hard and faster

didn't see him in the shadows
but I felt his hands on my shoulders
kneeling behind me
lifting my dress
roughly tearing my g string
and causing me to overbalance
back into his lap
didn't need to see
he was naked with a hard on
as he gripped my arms

she knelt in front
parted my thighs
smiled and sighed
as she dived between
and I felt her tongue
commence to make me so wet
while his lips sucked hard
on each of my breasts

they took it in turn
to pleasure my clit
her with that mouth
and him with his dick
and all the while
I was cumming with pleasure
I gave his cock some of my treasure
took him all in
and sucked hard and long
until he creamed my mouth
over again
while her fingers worked furiously
inside at my clit
I'd never had both at once so quick

this club is a favorite
I go to each week
I get fucked from behind
from this brown randy beast
with a cock that is 12 inches long
he can do me real deep
and his lady with her tongue
and fine fingered treasures
orgasm my clit just for the pleasure

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  • geckogirl silver member
    January 17
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    mmmm I gotta find a bar like this


  • sheltered
    September 12, 2008

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    That was hot, especially the last stanza.
    I found the rhyme distracting.
    Excellent images. Tres bones.


  • Pure Thought silver member
    September 4, 2008
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    Oh yeh, best one yet.

    Pants got so tight I had to unzip.
    Wow, well heated words.


    • Sanshay
      September 6, 2008
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      lol I hope you relieved the pressure


      • Pure Thought silver member
        September 6, 2008
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        Of course, I don't beleive in cold showers.


        • Sanshay
          September 9, 2008
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          So you need to Im me let me know how you relieved yourself on my words,I am fascinated to hear lol.


  • secberm
    August 29, 2008
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    Well, this was a pleasurable read. Nice escape from my norm. Hmmm... Maybe I should return to writing erotica. But with my experiences as the International Pimp of Debauchery, I really shouldn't. Ahhh... Too many secrets to reveal. Nonetheless, write on, princess.

    Dez

  • azureize
    August 29, 2008
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    HARD AS HELL...!!!

    DAMN, WOMAN -- YES, cum everywhere...!!


  • hotchocolate gold member
    August 29, 2008

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    Ahhhh.... A threesome more to please and more to get pleased by ! Great write!!!


  • Swangrnv gold member
    August 29, 2008
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    threesome!

    moresome, funsome! l.o.l. yeah..

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