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Inner peace

Laying in the grasslands
  see the zebras grazing in the distance?

Grasshoppers hopping
  listen to the music of the crickets
feel the fresh dew of the morning hour

  the sky is of orange
at the dawning of the day
  sun making its way
over the horizon
  giraffes drink from the babbling brook thirstly
elephants trod free

  mother nature calming my spirits
the plains of Africa
all around me.

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  • fantasysmurf
    September 3, 2008

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    Africa is probably one of the last places that the 'great' animals exist. I like the calm that surrounds this scene of morning 'Inner Peace'. Thank you for adding to my meadow


  • Jornada
    August 31, 2008
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    This is interesting--I never thought of the plains of Africa as attractive before.


  • michael thomas
    August 29, 2008
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    Very peaceful evocation in a fine poem form.


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    August 29, 2008

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    Beautiful imagery within this well written composition.
    Well Done & Best of Luck in the contest!!