love lives
until it is tempting
as long as
flower hiding in bud
romance run
half naked, rest imagination
thoughts emit more juices
through senses
than seen real
embrace tastes sweet
last long
in each other arms
than hardcore
that exhales sweet feelings
familiarity
too far
makes fingers numb
with hair on skin still
love stars with promise
showers of love from sky
all wet and drenching
ends in desert
serching for oasis
all due to
too much in too short
impatient humans are we
kill goose in indulgence
laying golden eggs
all desires satiated
love evaporates
as dew under morning Sun
Author notes
impatien men like women indulge, loose taste of love, limits its longevity
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Comments
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spell: indulgence...well find me the goose that lays the golden egg and I may be satiated as well lol
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a wonderful poem dad how true your words are that impatentance limits longevity a great poem dad full of some beautiful imagery and true emotion I liked stanzas three-four and five to six good luck in the contest dad with love from your ap daughter maralisa
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