Come sit, enjoy coffee and cake,
made with love for friendship sake.
Laughter, smiles you bring to me,
you make me proud as can be.
Brave and true you past the test,
one of our finest, one of the best.
Down to earth with no pretense,
fought for our country's defense.
A special day for a special man,
one who fought for this great land.
So proud to wish upon this day,
Happy Birthday Green Beret.
HAPPY BIRTHDAY P.N.
Author notes
Happy Birthday P.N.
In a list
A contest entry
- - Come Celebrate - [You're Invited] by Desire.
1134 points, ended September 15, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Excellent birthday wish as well as tribute to Paul--
Congratulations on the award!
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Thank you for reading, your comment is most appreciated. Sandy
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Special Wishes
Welcome to the Party
Woot
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ while taking in Your words: Down to earth with no pretense
when I read that part I kept seeing him for some reason polishing a rifle- just keeping it clean along with the other pieces in his collection~ Handling the treasures gently- I see him fishing and then putting the fish back into the water
Love how You penned from within with well wishes to bring forth a smile
I imagine P.N. smiling from ear to ear after inhaling Your verse, also a tight rhyme You have written
Excellent images & message You have brought forth
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Wonderfiul Comment!!
Thank you so much for this most wonderful coment. Thank you for hosting this for Paul. He is so sweet and deserves the honor you give him. You take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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Excellent sandy! Your poems always inspire!
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Thank you Rob
Thank you for srtopping by and reading. Always a delight when you do. Hugs and Smiles.
Sandy
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Sounds like one of the finest birthday celebrations I have ever seen before hunni
Just beautiful, You are a friend everyone loves
Best of luck!
♥
Stay safe
Love to you
~Manda
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Thank you Amanda. A lovely comment as always. Have a wonderful day. Hugs and Smiles
Love You,
Sandy
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Absolutely Maahvahlous!!!
Best of luck in the contest!!!
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Thank You
Your Coment was so nice. Thank you for reading. Take care.
Sandy
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Lovely birthday card. Rhyme is so nicely done and the flow goes smoothly to match. To honor someone in the armed forces as a tribute to their special day. Good luck with the contest.
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Great Poem!!!!!!!!!!
Dan, Thank you for reading and commenting on this special birthday poem. Always an honor to write for those who have served. Take care. Sandy
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A great gift you have given of your words. You honor his service to our country as well as the man himself. What a blessing you are to so many. Best to you in the contest, though I think it is more for you.
Sam
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Thank You Sam
Thank you for the nice comment on his birthday poem. I appreciate you stopping by. Take care, Sandy
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