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Cupped within His Hands

Cupped within the safety of His Hands
the miracle of nature has no demands!!
Assured that any danger lurking near
by His presence will naturally disappear!

Abandoning body, soul and mind
Spirit is given to the trusting child,
To sow and harvest a loving field,
That grace, love and mercy yields!

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Inspired by http://allpoetry.com/poem/4548357 2

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  • FaerieNWonderland
    December 4, 2008

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    this is great! i love the flow.
    i enjoyed so much reading it, thanks for sharing it.

    your Faerie


  • Lady Altheia gold member
    December 3, 2008
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    This is a little easier to read and understand than your other poem. I think you dida super job on both. Than you for sharing your poem with me. Best of luck toyou.

  • Lady Altheia gold member
    December 3, 2008

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    This is a little easier to read and understand than your other poem. I think you dida super job on both. Than you for sharing your poem with me. Best of luck toyou.


  • Snowing Kisses gold member
    December 3, 2008

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    This is lovely, infact it quite took my breath, very creatively written thankyou for sharing
    cupped within the safety of his hands
    the miracleof nature has no demands.
    beautiful lines here that took my hand and gently lead me into the poem
    thanks for sharing this little gem


  • cleanbyHISblood
    September 11, 2008
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    fantastic.


  • arafura gold member
    August 29, 2008
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    Lovely work. Beautifully expressed.


  • FransB gold member
    August 29, 2008

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    This is

    beautiful. Thank you for this entry. I will revisit at a later stage to comment in greater detail. Be blessed. Frans

    Ps
    I am back, as promised. 'What a lovely poem' I thought when I reread it. Just two stanzas, but so powerful. It describes and gives direction at the same time, the one not overriding the other. If I interprete you correctly, you convey the message that we have to 'stand back' give what and how we are, to be filled with His spirit. This I can appreciate, and must admid, that I sometimes step off this path - the humanness within me!! Another thing, just when I started to enjoy this poem, it ended. Perhaps I can encourage you to add to it. It surely will be a blessing to us who will read it. As always, be blessed. Frans

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