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[ Blackened blue ]

Blackened blue
glass petals of
bitterness
shatter
in the light
of realization

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  • Devilish Temptation
    November 17, 2008

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    Beautiful & Dark

    I enjoyed this ickle piece so straight to the point, bold with such emotion flowing from it. Very intense, nicely done.

  • Cloudwatcher
    November 2, 2008

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    This is amazing!

    Sometimes the only way to truly make sense of something is to shatter it in tiny pieces and piece it back in together. Sure, there might be some malformities when compared to the original structure and cracks sealed by glue, and you might end up with a few extra pieces, unable to figure out where they go(but these are not important, they were merely filler). Understanding the whole of something often requires a bit of breaking in pieces. Realization.


  • Mrs. Moretti
    October 31, 2008

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    I picture really pretty flowers when I read this.
    Pretty and forbidden. Glass.

    I love the imagery. It was pretty and short.

    Bruised.
    Nice.

  • Abnormal
    October 17, 2008
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    Lovely


  • Curious LiLi
    September 30, 2008
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    Ohhhh.
    Very deep.
    It brings so many images into my mind.
    Great write!

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