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Hearing the Fish Jump

You have fully filled
your emotional desires,
whether love, friendship
romance or wanton fires,

having sex for hours,
your spent even sore
making love all night,
yet you ache for more,

starving to eat
after just being fed
devouring all and full,
but hungry instead,

you have enjoyed it
in every possible way,
fulfilling pleasure
makes you want to play,

when you feel yearning
unquenchably rapacious
Not unsatisfied, but
continually voracious,

if you have enjoyed
been pleased emotionally ,

yet your heat grows hotter
even spent physically,

like a fish in water
who wants to get wet
you may be sexually insatiable
no matter how much you get.


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  • Rose Angel gold member
    September 1, 2008
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    I am chuckling and laughing..Saw fish jump when I saw the title, but it is another kettle of fish woven in words I read! That sense of humor is a gift you have here especially on a sensuous note! Dry humor aside, between the imagery and wit, a terrific write! Bookmark for this one! Good luck in the contest!


  • maralisa silver member
    August 29, 2008

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    a brillant take on the promt full of great imagery and lustfull emotions I love the analogy in stanza seven good luck in thw contest


  • Cannonsfire
    August 29, 2008

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    LOL Well seems you may actually know someone like this Spell error: continuelly should be 'continually' apart from that I just loved this!


  • Cup-a-Joe
    August 29, 2008
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    Now this is the poem I was going to write.lol
    Excellent.
    Joe

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