Deep flowing waters embellish my soul,
As your love becomes an intriguing vessel.
Your perfection intoxicates my every breath,
Whilst begging two beautiful hearts to nestle.
When you embrace my body we become whole,
You become the missing piece in my world.
If only we’d met within our youthful years,
I would’ve been spared of my past as life unfurled.
The future holds many different roads now,
Meeting you has cleared one path for success.
I now have dreams of what my life could be,
My future happiness is one thing you possess.
To be held by you brings a sense of comfort,
Having you near encourages enormous joy.
Your exquisite nature captivates my heart,
Your luminous effect leaves me feeling coy.
Together we become an unbeatable team,
Soul mates in love like us are rare to find.
You’re the stability needed to overcome my fears,
The support you extend helps level out my mind.
My best friend I’ve found within you,
You’re a companion to share my dreams.
Imperfections with you fade into the shadows,
The love I feel for you, through my smile, gleams.
I didn’t think I’d ever find the soul meant for mine,
But yours fits ideally like a hand to a glove.
I thank you for showing me happiness exists,
Thank you for being my vessel of love.
Author notes
This is dedicated to the love of my life Michael Baker.
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Beautiful words of deep love
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Oh wow...
What deep and beautiful expression of love.
What a lucky guy this Michael Baker is.
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S.W.E.E.T.
Very sweet,
the last line is the arrow through the heart.
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Thank you
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Simplistic Beauty @ its finest
I can completely relate to this line:
The future holds many different roads now,
Meeting you has cleared one path for success.
I now have dreams of what my life could be,
My future happiness is one thing you possess.
Oh good grief how I ever can. I gotso many paths I could take and still contemplate if I am making the right one. any ways what an incredibly beautiful poem you have posted here & I truly love how heartfelt this slice of poetry from you is. any ways a mighty beautiful well penned poem from the heart & I ish you both the very best of happiness and life together.
Grrrrrrrrrrrreat to have ya back online posting poetry. Sincerely, Tiger
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Thank You Sweetie
Thank you sweetie for the lovely comment and applause, I really appreciate it.
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Hey Hey Hey! Guess who's back and doin it big!! Hey mami! How you doin? I've missed you tons! OMG! You have no idea.
Loved this piece! It was so beautiful and so full of imagery. Welcome home girl! -
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Hey Gorgeous Girl
Hey there my gorgeous girl. I'm great now that I have the net on again. How are you doin? I've missed you heaps too darlin, more than you know!!! We'll have to catch up again one day!!! I won't be on much in the next day or two but apart from that I'll be on nearly every day!! Anyways, thanks for the lovely comment and I'm glad you enjoyed my poem.
Love always
Countrybabe
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well done
Together we become an unbeatable team,
Soul mates in love like us are rare to find.
You’re the stability needed to overcome my fears,
The support you extend helps level out my mind.
My best friend I’ve found within you,
You’re a companion to share my dreams.
Imperfections with you fade into the shadows,
The love I feel for you, through my smile, gleams.
you made me smile with this one.....good peom and nice poetry to read.did you get the idea off the shelf or did you think hard about it.I liked the above lines where phyming played a good role.Thanks for sharing.Please visit my poetry and offer some comments.
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Thank you
Thank you for your lovely comment, I really appreciate it.
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Wonderful!!!
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