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Sitting on the fence (Sonnet)

You act like you're the cats meow,
it's more like you're a damn fur-ball.
Would like to de-claw you somehow,
before we have another brawl.

So aloof and uninviting,
until you want something from me.
I have some trouble deciding,
if I'm engaged or if I'm free.

Catting about with other tom's,
leaving me sitting on the fence.
Then you meow and drop a bomb,
chasing you down makes no more sense.

I'll sit and sing a mournful tune,
until I get hit, with a shoe.

Author notes

Love you Tory. Honey, put down the steel toed boot!!

Was listening to a Stray Cat song and this came of it.
Has no relation to my life at all.

Sonnet

A Sonnet is a poem consisting of 14 lines (iambic pentameter) with a particular rhyming scheme:

Examples of a rhyming scheme:

#1) abab cdcd efef gg
#2) abba cddc effe gg
#3) abba abba cdcd cd

A Shakespearean (English) sonnet has three quatrains and a couplet, and rhymes abab cdcd efef gg.


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  • PassionsPromise gold member
    August 29, 2008
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    As always
    great job.
    best wishes in the contest


    Love
    Tory


  • Arizona Sunset
    August 29, 2008

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    lol loved the visuals happy it doesn't reflect you and Tory...you both are wonderful blessings always, and best to you in the contest~ Trisha~


  • fairytalelovestory
    August 29, 2008
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    lol this is neat. made me laugh.

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