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escape

and i washed my hair with the salt from your breath,
like tears you fell into my pattern of
disarray and i laughed
at the mistakes that i thought you were too
smart to
make.

you took a pizza knife like,
xacto
and cut me out of
every part you didn't want
to find.

i just laughed and said
'well that's what happens when you...'
slice yourself
into
pieces.


















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  • forbidden-colour
    September 3, 2008
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    I like the concept of a pizza cutter, It's very... imaginative. (:

    Great.


  • fanaa
    August 31, 2008
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    amazing.. i honestly am amazd at how you can write like this...?


  • Miss Faith
    August 31, 2008
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    babe,

    you are amazing.


  • black lagoon x
    August 29, 2008
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    Woah.

    The part with the pizza cutter was frickin amazing


  • Manoura xx
    August 29, 2008
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    wow, this blew me away!!!!!!!!! nice job...

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