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Fairy Land - English Sonnet

Can you hear the sound of music
as you walk down fairy lane
knowing you will get through it
as the music soothes your pain

Everything so perfect
like a real life fairytale

never again to neglect

and never again fail

 

Amazing! is the outcome

as you discover your dreams

you have truly outdone

what ever evil there has been

 

Believe in a friend as they will take you by the hand

and take you on the path that leads to fairyland




 

A contest entry

another friendship poem to all my friends on AP

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  • peaceimout
    June 20

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    Oh I do love this form and the overall flow was perfect! I love the message, very inspiring to say the least. Thank you so much for entering and good luck


  • Angelflower
    September 1, 2008

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    Aww this is really sweet!! you did such a wonderful job!! I really loved the emotion in this write! Thank you very much for sharing something so sweet!! I enjoyed reading it!! Best of luck in the contest!


    Angel