My body so warm,
Like the fire place flames.
My heart beats even faster,
As I get more excited.
The thought's of you rubbing my body,
With your sensual hand's.
Slowly rubbing your soft finger tip's,
So soft and gently they feel.
As you move them, All over my body,
I scream for even more.
As I feel the heat, from your body,
Flowing into mine, My eye's they are closed.
I lose control to you,
All of myself I give.
You hold me as well, As caress me making me feel,
Like a real sexsual and sensual woman again.
@ Written By: Brenda Gae Harper
August 29,2008
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WOW! "The thought's of you rubbing my body," I like this for it brings it into almost that feeling of the fantasy everyone is awaiting. "I lose control to you,
All of myself I give." How many times have we felt this way before? I know I have! This is wonderful. Totally sensual. Thank you for sharing this lovely piece for now I want to go to bed with my man!
Good luck in the contest! In Love & Light... Blessed Be! ~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~
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Love the pic. with this write and a very good write to!
As you move them, All over my body,
I scream for even more.
As I feel the heat, from your body,
Flowing into mine, My eye's they are closed.
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This is lovely
As the breath of life so nourishes the lungs and body so is the actions of love felt with every fiber of the soul yes the warmth takes us to our highest highs as we spread our wings in flight where ecstacy reigns through love
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er hot definitely sensually written here
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wow, this blew me away!!!!!!!!!
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