There’s a tremble to her lips,
and a glisten in her eyes,
as my breath meets hers,
I am born into the skies.
Velvet touch of magic,
makes me shiver to the bone,
as you tickle all my senses,
I realize I’ve been so alone.
A smile like the sunshine,
is held so high in me,
as you warm my very soul,
and set this cold heart free.
Rest assured it’s easy,
just to fall in love with you,
as you sparkle like the stars,
with words that shine so true.
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Make me feel (pre-writes allowed) by Shacadia Shay.
410 points, ended September 10, 2008, 45 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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such a beautiful poem and song combine, you are so wonderful my dear, and your words spoken here proves it.
Joann
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This is a verrry beautiful write...You are very talented
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This is absolutely breathtaking ~ best of luck in your contest
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song writer?
poem is like a song. Romantic and deep.
very touching words. Alot of people can relate to this.
sadness reborn. -
fantastic, well done exactly what i've asked for. please keep up this fantastic work. why not write & add another poem to my contest?
thank you for entering my contest & best of luck
--Blessed be--
Shacadia Shay -
i love this, the title is really nice as well =D...
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