The ideal husband would always come back
back from a good night out with his friends
back from work
back from past issues after verbal abuse has been negotiated
The ideal hub' would be no 'branded corporated'
he'll never do the coffee shops,
he'll prefer to spend some change on light bulbs
to keep the night sparking light
He'll always make you feel right
The I.D of him makes me feel so happy
He'd sing cranky songs just to tickle your fancy
to grab your attention
My ideal man would nearly always be looking in my direction
A contest entry
- An Ideal Husband by Frodofan.
380 points, ended September 10, 2008, 10 entries
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Comments
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Pretty good. Not sure I understood the "I.D." part however.
Thanks for entering.
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