She’s my best girlfriend,
with me to the very end,
she’s small not to tall,
I met her in a shopping mall.
She has beautiful curves,
never gets on my nerves,
her neck is long and slim,
she keeps herself real trim.
She has a pretty face,
I can take her anyplace,
can you see her shine,
why she is all mine.
We are both in tune,
I’ll hold her again real soon,
but sometimes we are not,
I’m thankful for what I’ve got.
Her music fills the air,
together we make a pair,
I play with her a lot,
happy with what I’ve got.
She gets wound up pretty tight,
but can come across so light,
I hear her loud and clear,
I always keep her near.
I can bring her down,
I’m not always the clown,
she always rings so true,
regardless of what I do.
I sometimes stroke her gently,
she is my cup of plenty,
most times I just pick on her,
my hands become a blur.
But she never seems to mind,
I’ve never been unkind,
she can make me laugh,
she is my better half.
She can make me sing,
can you hear her ring,
she can make me cry,
she never tells a lie.
All I give comes back,
very little do we lack,
she is full of surprises,
she never wears disguises.
I hold her as often as I can,
after all I am her man,
I touch her every day,
she never pushes me away.
In harmony oh so sweet,
she will always be my treat,
she never tells me no,
I’ll take her with me when I go.
My best girlfriend by far,
she is my guitar
Author notes
I know it is over 30 lines, but that's okay do what you must.
A contest entry
- A Contest for your Muse!!! -- by Florida Sunshine.
450 points, ended September 17, 2008, 34 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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There are many things that we draw from -- for inspiration~ the read of this flows very smoothly, you hardly notice the number of lines. -- Since mentioned in Author's notice I didn't hold this as part of the requirement... I do understand when you have so much to say.
Thanks for entering the contest, it was my pleasure to read and review your work,
Best of luck to you,
Florida Sunshine
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