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Intoxicating

 

 

The smell of your perfume

so intoxicating in every way

leaving me lost in a paradise

filled with wildflowers and berries     

 

you quickly walk away         

I follow closely behind

yearning for one more scent

 

heart beats uncontrollably   

as you slowly turn around

I see the ocean in your eyes

green and turquiose blue

 

you touch my face            

tenderly kiss my lips

and take me by the hand

 

walking hand in hand        

down to the fair

listening to the band

and dance the night away

 

you pull away                        

saying you have to go

but, I can't let you go

 

I need you

 

 

...desperately

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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100 Words
Prompt: Insatiable

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  • Ms. Black Eyeliner
    September 4, 2008
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    awwwwwww how sweeet i lvoe the ending


  • Cannonsfire
    August 30, 2008
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  • Valley Girl silver member
    August 29, 2008

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    Aww, this is a beautiful piece. It reminds me of summer love. This is so sweet and romantic! I am sure you will get a Gold throphy! All the best bro!! Take care! (hugs)


  • Asylaarix
    August 29, 2008

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    Awww baby! This is so sweet, so beautifully penned! I am intoxicated by your words. You bring happiness into my life with your amazing poetry. I adore you and this piece! Very beautifully done. Good luck to you hunny!



  • Arizona Sunset
    August 29, 2008

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    Very sweet, loving and beautifully written. Can almost feel the pulling in your words...best to you in the contest ~Blessings always~ Trisha

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