Hiding in my memory,
Lingering on my every word,
Speaking more than I can ever say,
Leading me through the days.
Showing me things that go unseen,
Bending my mind in ways unimaginable,
Giving me things that no one should deserve,
But you are special to me,
You are my Intrigue.
Spiking my mind with words so bizzare,
Casting them out of me,
Into the chasm of this world.
You are me and I am you,
As one, our music undulates,
Through and through the hearts of others.
You have whispered in me,
Things that I needed to see,
More than anything,
You inspire me, O Intrigue.
Loving my thoughts with care unbound,
Spreading my tears, laughs, and screams,
Even when you have left me for a time,
No matter the reason,
You have always returned.
Caring to the fullest extent,
Inspiring me everyday,
I shall never forget,
My one and only, Intrigue.
Author notes
This is about my muse, my Intrigue. That is her name, for she is the reason why I find so much in this world that bends my mind. Hope you enjoy!
A contest entry
- A Contest for your Muse!!! -- by Florida Sunshine.
450 points, ended September 17, 2008, 34 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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First of all -- I love the name of your muse. It connects so well to the poem you've penned. ~ I like; "Spiking my mind with words so bizzare,
Casting them out of me,
Into the chasm of this world." My muse does that to me too, sometimes.
Excellent - ending ~
Beautiful job ~ I enjoyed learning a little about intrique ~
You've met the contest requirements - Your muse ~ Poetry & Title ~ and line limit. It was a pleasure for me to read and review your work
Best of luck to you, thanks for entering
Florida Sunshine
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