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Friends forever

black strands on my pillow case
every look from you a taste of something untouchable, unknowable
i wonder how you feel
you're a wonder to me
every word, every song, every touch
a thousand different meanings
If i do the math
a thousand different solutions that all say i love you
but do you love me too?

will you throw it all away
on something they will never understand
for a love that might never ever work
Or will you walk away put up your walls
and hold up your just friends sign

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  • Exit-Stage-Right
    September 2, 2008

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    Commitment is a four letter word! ...er, roughly. It's tough (for guys, anyway) to make that final big step and commit to something long lasting. It's altogether too easy (for guys, again) to commit to something that's gone in a flash.


  • Lislaine
    August 29, 2008
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    Awwwwwwwww... this is soooo beautiful!! I can so relate to this poem!!! I LOVE IT!!!