Tongue resides behind my teeth
until enticed by kisses, sweet.
Upon embrace, I must confess,
that self-control is put to test.
For supple skin, so warm to taste,
would be a pity if put to waste.
Fingernails deepen grips
when I dare to move my hips.
And as I see eyes rolling back
I feel the urge for handsome snack.
Dancing tongue upon your skin,
then sharpened nibble sinking in.
Moans and groans, but not too quick,
for I prefer prolonging licks.
Author notes
Not my usual... I do believe I like it...
Comments and critique much appreciated ^_^
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MelodiousDreaming
3 entries
A contest entry
- 36 Options Contest! by chasingwhiterabbits.
700 points, ended September 3, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
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525 points, ended September 10, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Comments
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Cute
I feel the urge for handsome snack. That. Is. Hilarious. Thanks for an entertaining read. Erotica Lite.
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i like it I do! its short and sweet, brought a smile to my usually mornfull expression.
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Thank you
I'm very glad you liked it ^_^
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That is a very creative piece. The rhyming kept my attenion. My favorite lines were,
"And as I see eyes rolling back
I feel the urge for handsome snack.
Dancing tongue upon your skin,
then sharpened nibble sinking in.
Moans and groans, but not too quick,
for I prefer prolonging licks."
Good Job, Thank you for entering and good luck.
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Again, thank you for reading and such kind words, glad you enjoyed ^_^
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This was a very sexy and erotic write I must say! I loved it.
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Thank you for your kind words and the applause, glad you liked it. ^_^
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Wonderful
Very creative and so expressive. The images are very sensual and well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it
^_^
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A deleightfull way yielding to passion, and raptures sin....this places me in the mood for wine and lust
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Hahaha, well I'm very pleased you like it
Thank you for the applause (and the giggle I got from reading your comment) ^_^
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Superb!
Thank you for entering my contest. I really enjoyed reading this. The slight rhyme is what kept my attention, but the soaring passions that heightened after each line is what glued my eyes to the paper! Lols Very lovely take on vampire erotica. Nice! Keep up the good work.
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Wow, thank you so very much, I think you just made my day! ^_^ I'm so pleased you enjoyed it.
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This is very good; I like the subtleness of the rhyme. You get your point across very well. Good job, and good luck.
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Thanks so much, I'm very pleased you enjoyed it ^_^
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