Where mountains lull
awaiting winter's white
and gardenia's bloom in full force
below blue bellows
daisies dance
where four leaf clovers remain hidden
surrounded by sweet lilac scent
whipper whill sings sweetly
butterflies roam free
and dandilions dance with summers breeze
brooks sing in unison
ah meadow, sweet meadow
alive in fantasy's mind.
A contest entry
- Fill an Empty Meadow by fantasysmurf.
666 points, ended September 10, 2008, 13 entries
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Wonderful imagery in this, a beautiful poem. I especially love the second stanza.
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A great entry
thanks for taking part, wishing you luck would be an insult to your talent
so take care
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Billy (Rhythm Child) -
That's the story!
Yes this meadow would be lovely to walk through on a Summer's day. Thank you for this creation, poet - it is a gem x
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SO BEAUTIFUL AND RELAXING!!!!
This is where I want to be!
Each description is so soft and beautiful!!!!
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A Calgon take me away moment in reading this. I do so love a solitary time embibing in nature. Lovely write.
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We always had a whippoorwill in our woods - they are so wonderful! A good addition to this meadow - I wish I had thought to include him too!
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