Words don't usually stay in my head
even if i am tired and laying in bed
all i have do is think of you
and the little things that you do
Inspiration can come from anywhere
but you are the only one for me, i swear
can't write a word unless you are the one in my thoughts
thinking of you gets rid of my stomach knots
As i write this you are inside
and i know you never hide
the beauty of flowers can express all of yours
you open up all my opportunity doors
stay with me when i am drowning
only words of yours is counting
i want to be with the one i know
my one and only muse that will never go...
Author notes
A muse to me is Lorena.. my love and soul mate and even when she passes.... happy memories of hers will keep me going... to write and to live
A contest entry
- A Contest for your Muse!!! -- by Florida Sunshine.
450 points, ended September 17, 2008, 34 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A very loving poem full of emotion. I could really feel the undying affection. Rarely do I comment on author notes but yours were beautiful.
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Well, to you and Lorena ~ I think what a beautiful tribute to your muse -- I like the flow of the poem ~ and you wrote this so anyone can relate -- dreaming they were your muse.
Beautiful job ~ Only requirements was your muse and line limit you satisfied both ~ this is an accepted entry
Best of luck to you, it was my pleasure to read and review your work.
Thanks,
Florida Sunshine
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A very good poem. All I have to do is thnk of you...Thats a great lne with lots of truth, having a muse is lke a girlfriend. always there but sometimes not seen.
return teh favor
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