Patches of green slowly fade away.
Pieces of memory get in the way.
Tufts of red come into sight.
Lots of loneliness gird me tight.
Taking away all virescence,
You must belong to silence.
Author notes
Autumn is approaching. I love this season, especially the sunlight which only belong to Autumn...
A contest entry
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Comments
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truly pretty poem, nice flow and good rhymes, thank you for this entry, good luck in my contest
Linda
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This is one strong piece of poetry. It commands attention and got mine fully. Take a bow on this one; you deserve it!
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=D you used "virescence" !!
i dont always like rhyming poetry...
but this is really great.
good luck!
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Well, I couldn't find a word better than that... You see, it's difficult to find a word suitable for 'silence'...
And thank you very much for your comment!
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Beautiful, unique, so true, and strictly your style. I love the way you write, I really do.
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wow, this blew me away!!!!!!!!! nice job...
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