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Twilight (U/C)

Breathe, breathe, breathe
The sun's been sinking down
Someone's gone and killed it
You tell me, with a frown

The moon's not coming up yet
It's twilight time for us
Stuck between the day and night
But I've never heard you fuss

We go through a lot of trouble
You always comment on my grace
You say how fluidly I move
A little blush across your face



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  • Lokisana
    September 17, 2008

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    ^.^ This is turning into something veeery interesting lovely! It's cute! hehe, at any rate, I like it! It flows nicely, and the setting's quite unique