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Resplendent

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The colors crash into your eyes, brilliance at every turn
Oranges bright enough to eat, reds so deep they leave a burn

The color scheme is so vibrant it almost leaves you blind
Greens are mixed with bronze and gold, yellows of every kind

The rocky ledge adds a drab contrast, of grays and blue and brown
You can find most any color you like, if you just look around

Autumn shows its splendor, in a brilliant rainbow display
Come to see North Michigan and you will want to stay

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  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    August 30, 2008

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    Thank you for entering our contest with your awesome poem. Good luck to you, Poet!!! Peace, Cyn


  • toomysterious
    August 29, 2008

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    Beautiful images here, I love color and especially the beautiful colorfulness of autumn. You have done an excellent job showing it. North Michigan sound like a lovely place to visit.


  • arafura gold member
    August 29, 2008

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    North Michigan in the fall sounds beautiful. Your poem is full of color and imagery. The rhyme is good and it flows well.