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Love and Hate

Love and hate are very different
and quite opposite from one another.

BUT, to truly hate someone,
you must have loved him at one time,
for hate grows best
in the neglected garden
of love gone bad.

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  • Janice M Pickett
    November 30, 2008

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    very true and yes this is the case. Before Hate, must come some emotion. Not always love but it can also be total lack of interest. No matter what it gives one the chance to decide on ones feelings.
    Great work.

  • cindy4
    October 23, 2008
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    Good write


  • HaleyMary
    September 23, 2008

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    Wow, this poem really made me think. Especially the part about having to love someone in order to hate them. I'm not sure I completely agree with the message of the poem, but I do think that in order to hate someone, first you would have to know them really well. I also liked the part of the neglected garden. It made me think of the garden of adam and eve. I guess you could say there are some bad apples in every garden. Really bad pun warning.


  • sunslave
    August 29, 2008
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    So true.

    so true it kinda scares me


  • Quill Bill
    August 29, 2008

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    I live in the shadows
    Cast by she who once
    Blighted my life,
    Yet I promise
    You no bitter twist,
    For though the flames
    Of love no longer burn
    My memorises shine
    And linger like glow
    Embers to warm
    My weary heart.


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    August 29, 2008
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    Nicely phrased into a poem.


  • Melodies
    August 28, 2008

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    Very insightful and true in many cases. Smart entry!

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