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Dust

All the sky in a single moment,
a proud skyline dissolves,
eaten by clouds in prophile,
silent, this crumbling,
naught of feeling, save a rumbling
in a belly, somewhy, somewhere,
weak of echo, and just as still.

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  • HeatherBell
    August 30, 2008
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    touching...

    beautifully written. evokes an emptiness. sigh


    • The Tower
      August 31, 2008
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      You're not the only one breathing that sigh right now, methinks.


  • Manoura xx
    August 29, 2008
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    wow, this blew me away!!!!!!!!!