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~ It says I love you~

I look at you till our eyes meet.
I can't get enough.
Your sweetness lingers as your lips devour me.
Softly at first then harder.
Your tongue feeling its way...
tracing my lips..tasting me...
your kiss grows stronger.
I moan softly..
Your hand reaches for my face..
pulling me closer to you.
I open my mouth a little more,
give me all of you.
I want to taste every inch of you.
Is it passion? Or is it lust?
Do you love me? Can you feel it?
Your lips so soft, so gentle,
yet pressing and demanding at the same time..
Demanding that your "voice" be heard...
I love you, it says over and over....
I LOVE YOu!

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  • Bohemianwriter
    February 4
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    Best write yet XxX


  • nevadapoet
    September 1, 2008

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    A powerful write and perfect entry for the contest. Best of luck and thanks for the entry.
    Nevadapoet


  • Angelflower
    September 1, 2008

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    This was really passionate.... you did a wonderful job describing a loving kiss.. thank you very much for sharing! best of luck in the contest!

    Angel