Music it plays on . . .rippling
a background to our art
sweet raindrops; slowly dripping
to the rhythm of our heart
that single organ beating
blood to us, to every part
I can feel your pulse - it's thickening
Can you hear my heart? It's quickening
as my fingers dance along your spine
my lips on yours and yours on mine
The world fades to quiet dark
dimmed with red and candles
heat so strong, stiff, and stark
liquid trembling savagely gentle
I can feel your pulse - it's thickening
Can you hear my heart? It's quickening
as my legs wrap around your spine
my lips on your and yours on mine
It's beautiful
I see your face, see it in my mind
Oh nothing could compare to this love
it's a power stronger than anything I've ever known
oh I need you now more than everything
Need You
I can feel your pulse - it's thickening
Can you hear my heart? It's quickening
as my fingers dance along your spine
my lips on yours and yours on mine
Author notes
Just thinking in words here. More like fantasies about my boyfreind, we weren't dating long when I wrote this. Hope you like. . .
Picture was found through metacrawler at~
www.bergoiata.org/f
e/collection1/10.htm
A contest entry
- What Is A Kiss by nevadapoet.
700 points, ended September 8, 2008, 50 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Romantic Pre-Writes by poets whisper.
700 points, ended December 13, 2008, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think? ? ?
Comments
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beautiful flow of luscious and sensuous.
What a lovely heart of passion beats within your soul!
BRAVO! BRAVO!
ears/AP CAT- we thought it was purrr-fection!
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wow very good write there were a few jigsaws in it though which is quite astounding for a really good piece like your im not saying thats bad but its always good to change the line set every now and then
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Beautiful write...lyrical with great flow and rhyme. A perfect entry for the contest. Best of luck and thanks for the entry.
Nevadapoet -
oo very powerful
i like it, love and cant wait to read more! i have always liked this kind of poetry and i love how u put music along side a choris of emotion.
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