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Magic Gate

Follow me, now, my sweet child
Let me lead the way
I'll take you to a place of dreams
Where we will run and play

The path takes perfect timing
Wait for the sign from God
For only He can lead us
It is His secret spot

Let's follow, now, the rainbow
It's beauty leads us there
To this place of magic
Where there's nothing to fear

Only the sweetest flowers
Will bloom in greenest fields
Only Gods magic creatures
To our every whim will yeild

My child this is heaven
The rainbow is the Gate
And only He can lead us
To wallow in His Grace

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Artwork by J.D. Garrett (Author)

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  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    September 15, 2008

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    this is lovely
    a precious truth
    I love
    My child this is heaven
    The rainbow is a gate
    And only he can lead us
    To wallow in His grace
    very beautiful
    Gd bless my friend...


  • passim silver member
    September 15, 2008
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    An inspirational piece for sure. I enjoyed it very much.


  • Paloszoo gold member
    September 4, 2008

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    Beautiful inspirational piece. Well done! I need to hear writes like this once in awhile, if you know what I mean! Thanks so much for the journey into the light!


  • ViolentSerenity
    August 30, 2008

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    mama you entered this one too :)

    your gonna beat me i know it this is sooo good i am atheist but i should have used a supream being you'll win i know it ♥