lucid among flora,
in a veil blue
cloud tufts …tickle
the morning star
to a silent song,
the sparrow
sings~~
joyance,
in dance
to a summer’s
breeze
with softer sighs,
of lofty trees
…green leaves
rustle-
to a meadow’s serene
to slumberous
eyes,
I wipe away…
last night’s stars,
and fanciful
dreams
granting…
this brand new day.
Author notes
this writing was prompted by the word breathe...
i felt a little poetic today...my verse sang, to me and caused me to breathe...
A contest entry
- breathe by Namita.
800 points, ended October 16, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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A beautiful piece of poetry, it flows very nicely and I enjoyed this. There is such peace in this one; you want to stay there.
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Oh, how I love this piece. It is how I felt this morning. Brand new! What a gift we are given each day. Best to you in the contest.
Sam
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this is lovely malabu, you sure are poetic as ever, and prose is wonderful as rhyming is in a unique way, good luck
Linda
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excellent~
I love it sweetie
And think you penned it perfectly
Best of luck in the contest
I have up 2 new ones do drop in and see me ya hunk
Hugs n love
Susan~~~
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